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Structures and Surrendering

A man buys an old house

Every year the storms blow in

And he hammers

Repairs

Underpins

Every year more parts of the house are destroyed

It is untenable

Yet he fights on

Determined not to be

Defeated

Until one day

After a particularly bad storm is repeated

The man throws his arms in the air

Surrendering

Let’s it go

He loosens all the nails

Watches the iron lift and blow

Until all that is left is debris

Piled in a heap down below

And when it’s cleared away

He builds a brand new home

With strong footings

Deep walls

Designed to take the load

Some structures are doomed to fail

Houses

Relationships

Places

They reach a certain point of decay

The repair of which is too great

To personally expend

Financial loss incurred snowballs

No longer can we gloss things over

They are what they are

It is what it is

Let them go

Build something new

Let the old crap blow away

As humans we expend a lot of energy

On holding on

People

Jobs

Things we have out grown

Instead of like nature

Letting go

What blows blows

Let it go

See what stays

Work with that

*i was reading a book called “the Magicians Way” that spoke about structures. How a cube is difficult to roll, how a sphere does it naturally.

How humans have these same structures that sit just below the level of where they’re making decisions from. What these structures mean for our decision making processes.

I often weave philosophy into my poems because that’s how my subconscious speaks to me and I believe poetry also speaks to the subconscious in others.

Having said that once the words have left me, I have no control over how the reader absorbs them or layers the words into their circumstance.

I am not inciting anyone to demolish anything – it is merely an invitation to look at structures.

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