4pm

There is a pane of glass

In my house

That the light shines through

At 4pm

In winter

That sunbright shaft

Touches the leaves of a plant in the corner

That otherwise lives in the dark

all day

I hold my fingers to the glow

Feel them warm

Dust motes twirl

Turned to gold

Magical.

Just for a few moments

Each day

That plant is reborn

Inhales a deep breath of all the nutrients it requires

To photosynthesise

Energise

And stay alive

So much darkness

And only minutes of light

All that it needs

Arrives

Right on queue

But I wonder

As might you

Does it spend the in between

waiting

Or growing

It’s dark green leaves

And does it ever fear

The light may move

Seasons turn

But I’ve observed

The light returns

And that plant

Is over thirty years old

So

It’s either growing in faith

Or

I would say

It knows something I don’t

8 thoughts on “4pm

  1. I really enjoyed this poem because it takes something so simple—a beam of sunlight—and turns it into a reflection on patience, resilience, and trust. The image of the plant receiving only a few minutes of light each day yet continuing to thrive for over thirty years is powerful. It made me think about how we often worry during difficult or uncertain times, while nature simply continues growing and adapting. The ending especially stood out to me because it suggests that the plant may not be waiting in fear for the light to return—it may simply trust that it will. That idea can apply to people as well. Sometimes growth happens in the darker seasons of life, even when we can’t yet see the light.

  2. Such a poignant poem. The lines, “I hold my fingers to the glow” and then “turned to gold” makes me think of the spinning wheel weaving the golden thread out of straw. However, yours is much happier unlike Rumpelstiltskin’s.

  3. I knew trees can live very long, but I had no idea that house plants can live for decades. Thank you for a beautiful poem, capturing a moment that could so easily have gone unnoticed. May we always open our inner eyes to the magic all around us.

    • Hi Yacoob, yes I bought this plant before my husband and I were married – I repotted it once – last year and it enjoyed the new soil, same pot. I call it our marriage plant because it’s been around longer than that. It looks very well and will probably outlast the pair of us – it’s a nice thought that perhaps one of the boys will keep it alive

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