You’re the dead note on
My keyboard
In every tune I play
The hollow space beneath my step
The window gap
Where the wind always whines
I cannot get it closed up tight
No matter how I try
The one plate left out of the dishwasher
When I swore I counted every one
I missed it
I missed you
What I really mean to say
Is you’re the stitch dropped in my knitting
But it’s round the back
And I can’t see it
Just feel the cold breeze
Point of loss
Something uncovered
The prickle in my sock
The sound at the door
That isn’t a knock
And there’s no one there
When I go to look
You aren’t the sound of rain
But the silence between storms
You are the shadow flitting on the ground
But when I look up there is no bird
No plane
You’re the sound
And the feeling of something slipping
Away
And yet I know in my heart
The scar where you were
Will always stay
Like
All these things
I cannot
Enunciate
Because they are lodged behind my tongue
Loaded in a gun
That was broken
Thrown away
And never really used
In the first place
A misfire
With blank bullets
This I knew.
Yet I shot myself anyway
Still do
I can almost hear that as a song! ๐
Really? Maybe I should give it to George at Zoolon Audio to see what he makes of it ๐
Was he the chap that sang that one at the end of last year?? If so, definitely ๐
Yes! Gave him a poem and he turned it into music – beautifully done and such a great experience as a poet to see your words put to tune.
Yes!! I remember him and he did you justice I recall ๐
He is very good.
Yep, there’s always (at least) one.
Yep ๐
Kate… This struck me so deep. I resonated so much with some of the words you used. I love the rhythm and word play of “You arenโt the sound of rain But the silence between storms.” Wonderful. Thank you.
Thank you Laura ๐
Can’t live with him, can’t live without him. Nice poem Kate.
Thanks Len ๐
This is beautifully penned, Kate! So glad I found your blog. ๐
Hi Katy thank you Iโm glad you enjoyed the poem and also that you found the blog, will duck over and check yours out as well ๐
This is absolutely gorgeous
Thanks Harley ๐