A word
After a word
After a word
With each adding depth to the meaning
Of the one which came before it
As few as possible
Not necessarily beautiful
But true
That is how things should be written
Not
The magnificence of the omnipresent moment adds splendid divulgence to the optical illusion that we are alive
Or the magnitude in the momentum of this momentary lapse in perpetuity seeks to …
Confuse
Befuddle
Overwhelm
It is here that we err
Are lead astray
By calling down great sounding nothings
To layer upon layer
Reduce the words voice
To nothing
More words can mean less
And weighty words even more so
And just a few can be staggering
In their clarity
Be so thrilling in their succinct turn of phrase
That they linger in the mind all day
Words are something writers need to pay attention to
Or you can end up with a meaningless
Frustrating mouthful of words
And nowhere to spit them into
So they stay in the head, clogging
Fouling the drains of your mind
Stinking
As you are lost sinking
Into a Government form
That asks twenty questions
And explains three pages
Of meaningless gorm
Dredged up by some wanker
That does not understand words
Or what they have even written
Yet pours scorn on the reader
“It’s quite clear you just add your name – and sign here”
No
It is anything but clear and is designed to frustrate
And obfuscate
Keeping ordinary people under heel
And too busy dealing with the trauma and boredom of sealing their fates on forms that don’t make sense
And yet they feel ignorant
No
You
Are
Not
Ignorant, dear reader
What you are trying to fathom is not literate
In any sense
It should be an offence
To speak so elaborately that the ordinary man cannot understand what he is reading
Which is why so many documents used to be written in Latin
Including laws – so we needed to employ a solicitor
Religion
So we required a priest
Yet now it is all in a language that is so overbearing that no meaning seeps around the edges
So again
We must employ a dozen professionals
Just to prepare a tax return for a company and it’s five trusts which is required just so we have some method of fighting the unjust
Tax arrangements
In this country
Sorry
That descended into a rant quickly
The point is
As one layer of society begins to layer itself in complexity
So another
And another is required
And more employed
And take sides
And meaning is lost
Truth is flown
And it started with the words which were used
So very poorly
Used to hide the truth
And add so many layers
That never get to the point of anything
Strangling words of all meaning
Then stringing them along
Like dead birds
On a line that disappears into the distance
Telling nothing but lies
It is no wonder society loses meaning
Depth
Value
When the language we speak
Is being swallowed alive
By words
That are nothing but complicated lies
And meaningless jargon
Harbingers of a society eating itself alive
Which is also why people began swearing …fuck me! It just feels like a divine truth to swear when faced with a five page government form these days or a Real Estate ten page nothing or any other document that has been brushed with a legal feather.
Forgive me my rant
But nothing seems to get clearer
It just becomes more buried
Beneath
Words
That
Don’t
Bloody
Matter.
All so very true Kate…….and that doesn’t include the fine print. Keep your words and expressions simple.
Thanks Len. 😊
I very much like this!!! Great job!!!
True on so many levels. Literary writers can drive me nuts they should have listened to Mark Twain. I used to rant on this. They deliberately obfuscate to look smart. And now government bullshit We have been filling out forms for weeks. Nice post. I’ve been working but not really posting from it Maybe post some older stuff. Talking about current projects takes away the immediacy of working on the project.
Governments are the worse kind because an ordinary person just employ a professional to deal with their over loaded forms and their staff half the time don’t know what they mean. We need to simplify everything – then perhaps depression rates will drop.
I heard one of our pundits say how easy they make it when we are supposed to pay taxes, but when we are supposed to get anything like unemployment, they make it nearly impossible — mostly to give themselves jobs. Bureaucracy.
Word!!!! 👏🏻💚
😊
These lines made me laugh for the sheer truth to them:
As you are lost sinking
Into a Government form
That asks twenty questions
And explains three pages
Of meaningless gorm
Dredged up by some wanker
That does not understand words
Or what they have even written
Yet pours scorn on the reader
“It’s quite clear you just add your name – and sign here”
Yes, sometimes less IS more.
Enjoyed this, Kate.
Some frustration – I wrote this poem in my head while I was running and got so mad that I shaved ten seconds off the run time and can’t actually remember running 😂
😁
True on so many levels. Literary writers can drive me nuts they should have listened to Mark Twain. I used to rant on this. They deliberately obfuscate to look smart. And now government bullshit We have been filling out forms for weeks. Nice post. I’ve been working but not really posting from it Maybe post some older stuff. Talking about current projects takes away the immediacy of working on the project.
I agree with that last sentence – talking about things that are current does steal its energy.